The Rooster wanted to come out for the weekend. I’m a self-confessed pain in the
environmental arse when it comes to fuel.
I can’t take a drive unless I consider my carbon tyre-track. Am I able to do other errands on this
trip? Could it wait? Could I walk?
The Rooster coming out for the weekend involved a bus trip from
Cairns. Surely a bus is a more energy
efficient way to travel.
After I made peace with nature for my vicarious recreational abuse of
fossil fuels, the Rooster arrived on the bus on our tenth day of rain. What better place to spend a wet weekend than
the farm.
The Rooster is a giant, silent presence that moves slowly,
mostly towards the sofa where he sprawls or to the kitchen to refuel
his ever-growing body. The Rooster never
wastes words. When he finally talks, it’s
for good reason.
“Mum,” he said on Saturday morning. “Can you help me with my English?”
I’ve always found it difficult to help the boys with their work at boarding school. Email and the phone
is no substitute for presence. Worse, the Rooster tends to ask for help the
night before his assessment is due. I
can’t do anything, but a quick edit for spelling and grammar. I am still working with him on his time
management, but time has little relevance for him apart from Time to eat, Time
to sleep, Time to go hunting, Time to play footy and so on.
So I was surprised to learn his English draft was due on
Tuesday. The Rooster has never been an
early bird and I was excited to actually have a chance to help him, in time and
place.
His task was to analyse a poem from history and relate it to
a contemporary issue with reference to the historical context and author’s circumstances.
He had chosen the following poem and I read only a few lines
before I felt I was on a dinghy in the Torres Strait in heavy seas and boxing
tide with a bad case of motion sickness.
I’ve never been keen on poetry which stems from pure ignorance and a
little fear of words that aren’t garden-variety Standard Australian English.
I seriously regretted not paying attention when poetry was on the class menu
thirty years ago.
The World Is Too Much With Us
The world
is too much with us; late and soon,
Getting
and spending, we lay waste our powers;—
Little we
see in Nature that is ours;
We have
given our hearts away, a sordid boon!
This Sea
that bares her bosom to the moon;
The winds
that will be howling at all hours,
And are
up-gathered now like sleeping flowers;
For this,
for everything, we are out of tune;
It moves
us not. Great God! I’d rather be
A Pagan
suckled in a creed outworn;
So might
I, standing on this pleasant lea,
Have
glimpses that would make me less forlorn;
Have sight
of Proteus rising from the sea;
Or hear
old Triton blow his wreathèd horn.
The Rooster saw my distress, but he had it all worked out and gave me a run
down. He had annotated the poem, defined
the whacky words like “sordid boon,” “lay waste our powers” and “bares her
bosom” and checked out the identities of Proteus and Triton (I was thinking a
South African flower and a Mitsubishi ute).
We Googled a bit of history and I could see why the teacher set the
task. That’s when I started to get very depressed
about the state of our world.
Wordsworth wrote the poem in the early 19th
century. He is lamenting the First
Industrial Revolution which led humanity away from the glory of Nature towards
machines, chemicals, mining of coal and iron ore, gas lighting, manufactured
products and the construction of roads, rail and waterways. People flocked from the countryside to the
cities to get work in the factories and enjoy a better standard of living for the first time in English history.
Wordsworth was a Romantic poet who wrote, not mushy
declarations of love, but about the beauty of Nature, favouring emotion and
intuition as opposed to the current trend of the time (the Age of Enlightenment)
which praised reasoning and analytical thinking. That he capitalised Nature suggests to me he’s
keen on it having proper noun status rather being an ordinary abstract noun.
“We have given our hearts away” is a reference to turning
our backs on nature.
The “sordid boon” is the sick materialism people have
embraced following the increase in the standard of living brought about by the
First Industrial Revolution. I thought
that was a bit hypocritical considering Wordsworth was socially privileged and
with ‘help’ he would have had the time to enjoy nature. On the other hand, if you are illiterate and spend
sixteen hours a day in a factory weaving fabric, I understand a ‘get and spend’
approach to life.
“For this, for everything, we are out of tune.” Humans are on a path of devastation.
Wordsworth wishes he was a pagan so he wasn’t so disturbed by the way
humanity has embraced consumerism.
Hang on! Isn’t he
talking about the digital revolution of the 21st century and the
materialism that sustains people using money they don't have (credit) to live unsustainable lifestyles?
If Wordsworth thought things were bad 200 years ago, he’d be
writing in his grave today. Humanity has
declined to new depths and we are headed for unprecedented disaster; an
increasingly warmer world, the loss of natural habitat through urbanisation and rising temperatures, uncertain
food security, political instability, an overwhelmingly indolent first world population
that has caused the problem and then, ultimate anarchy, war and death. Of course, there will be whimpering.
I’d had enough of poetry. It was depressing. I felt like a drink, but I did some yoga to
calm my nerves while the Rooster worked on his assignment.
The Glade. Before the rain. |
Then the two of us went for a long walk, he slashing weeds
with his bush knife, me revelling in this little pocket of nature largely
untouched by industry (except that it is tertiary growth rainforest and there
are more weeds than native grasses!).
There had been torrential rain during the week. I’d never seen the Dirran Creek in
flood. Where there had been a crystal-clear
stream meandering around sentinel-like boulders, there was a single milky river,
swollen with rage. What I saw wasn’t the
peak of floodwater. Metres higher,
trees, logs and debris had been discarded on the path we walked.
A tree, thirty metres tall, flicked asunder.
The Glade, after flood waters have receded. |
It occurred to me Wordsworth might not be so disturbed if he
knew nature could deposit a tree, weighing a tonne, two metres up a hill. Perhaps he didn’t credit nature with enough
resilience. For a few moments, till
I returned to the house and listened to the road trains rumbling on the highway
transporting imported electronics, clothes manufactured in Asian sweatshops and
mixed berries shipped from China (more on this one), I thought Nature might come through the 21st century with nothing more than bruises, cuts and abrasions.
Oh my, I am a Wordsworth nut. I LOVED exploring his poetry in school and beyond. I haven't thought about his words in a long time, but as soon as I began reading I was swept away. Beautiful, lyrical, illustrative and tender. I wonder who is the modern day Wordsworth. I toyed with John Cooper Clarke for a while. Evidently Chicken Town was a hot favourite - I lived in a Chicken Town, and the words fuelled my young angst. I still read and love poetry (though I don't exactly have many people with whom to share the joy) I admire a poets art to be able to communicate so much with so little. Though from the length of this post you can tell I'm no poet!
ReplyDeleteAfter all these years I had no idea you loved poetry. I feel bad you could never share the beauty you find in poetry, because I don't get it (unless I do a lot of Google research first, and you taught me about Google, remember).
ReplyDeleteI have, of late, tried to read poetry and make sense of it, and sharpen my writing but can only make a start on humorous Australian poems only because they are funny. I wonder if there is a part in the brain that understands poetry - like sport, my poetry brain is the size and texture of a dried currant!
I think if you split that last sentence you could have the start of your very own poem:
ReplyDeleteMy poetry brain
Withered currant
I'll hand over to you for the next lines...
And I seem to remember you did write a rather smashing Dog Poem which was printed in the Torres News. If that's not affirming I don't know what is.
OK...that's not affirming.
Can I change currant to current?
ReplyDeleteOh, yes, the dog poem. Some laughed, many fumed. But like Wordsworth, no one listened and nothing changed. Hell, just imagine how bad the dog situation on TI will be in 2013 years! It will have been worth it if a year 12 student studies my dog poem as part of their HSC.